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Re: The Day The Sun Went Dark
Hey there! I couldn't stop noticing that you have started three paragraphs continuously with the protagonist's name. There is nothing wrong with,but it would be more enjoyable if you changed ...
Jul 27, 2015
Hey there! I couldn't stop noticing that you have started three paragraphs continuously with the protagonist's name. There is nothing wrong with,but it would be more enjoyable if you changed ...
Jul 27, 2015