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I VOLUNTEER AS TRIBUTE!!!! I am ready to participate in this awesome challenge!

I liked the sense you were trying to convey here although I was having a hard time working out who she was writing to. The person does not seem to ...

May 17, 1945 Iwo Jima We have been at battle for two days shy of a month. 100,000 of us went into this, brave as we are, and already approximately ...

this is extremely well written, once i started reading i really liked it, then when he stabbed her i couldnt keep my eyes off the screen, even though i dont ...

dude! this is extremely well written i love it! i cant find much to fix at this point, defiantly continue on with this i cant wait to see how it ...

how do you clear a chat feed? and what if a whole section turned a different color what do you do?

this is great i really like it! is this a whole book? is there more? i would love to read the whole thing if there is! the one sentence should ...

you answered all my questions! great job i love it! i think you should definatly do more with this, and one last question, does she choose door 1 or 2 ...

its really good i like it, He was told that a big bottle of bourbon wouldn't help. He did it anyway with this you might want to add a coma ...

when you start having arguments with characters you have a permanent writer's block with. so true! i do that all the time! -when you daydream constantly and rewind and change ...

banana while jumping from tree to tree with my tail i saw a large odd group apparently looking for tomaplltoes, whatever that is, i i jumped down onto the plastic-sword ...

this is something i sort of came up with, im stuck right now as to where to go next, the first 3 highlighted paragraphs i dont know wich one i ...

this is very interesting, im Cristian myself, this was an interesting interpretation of what would happen with the rapture, i dont know much about it but i was really good, ...

awesome piece of writing the last 3 words is what really hooked me! pm me when you put up more! though you need to further explain the deal with the ...

normally i just pick up random books, i go to the library a lot so whatever sticks out, but i always go back to my favorite authors and see if ...