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Re: Lost
I love how you used short lines in your stanzas; It really helped flow and bring your point across. I don't see anything you need to change. Good job! :D
Dec 5, 2009
I love how you used short lines in your stanzas; It really helped flow and bring your point across. I don't see anything you need to change. Good job! :D
Dec 5, 2009