aimlesswanderer

Hey, I liked this because it was different with the perfect amount of sarcasm. There's a few sentences however that may need some slight changes. The doorbell tinkled, and Joann ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this chapter. Your descriptions of his routine helped readers understand more about him then that he is a boy who goes to a coffee shop. " ...

I love your poem, but there's a few things I thought just stood out. When thy eyes touched mine For the very first time I knew it would be forever ...

Hey, I'm going to post a quick reply, okay? Okay, I'll admit I clicked on to this page thinking 'oh great another love story where a girl doesn't want to ...

Hey, I loved this conversation it was a great way to start off the story. The adverbs you used really helped the words flow, and you did a great job ...

Hey, this is only my second time posting one of my works, so I apoligize. This poem is in the point of view of Rose from Titanic . On the ...

Hey, That's a great way to start, and it's so true. It sounds so real and blunt, and that's what makes it interesting. I loved it, but there is one ...

Hey, I'm new to Young Writer's Society. So there are bound to be mistakes, and feel free to point them out. I've looked it over and over though so I ...

Hey, i am new so sorry if I mess this up. I find it hard to believe that, as many gurus say we are made stronger by our disappointments. To ...

I really liked your story, but here are some things that I think you need to change. In this story a young girl about the age of 13 found what ...

I love how you used short lines in your stanzas; It really helped flow and bring your point across. I don't see anything you need to change. Good job! :D

You have found “love” again And it hurts to see That another victim has given in When she sits on your knee All I think about is, when it was ...

I really enjoyed the story. Liz's comments really made me think, and my heart just went out to your characters. I think Liz is very original I've never read another ...