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  • Poetry » General, Politics Re: The Abomination

    I have only one problem with this poem. It's about the line "There once was a man who lived by the book." I like what you are trying to do ...

    Feb 13, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Snowfall

    Thanks sargsauce, For your questions about where the old man lives, the wife and husband took the old man to a hospital in Utah for treatment, and now are on ...

    Jan 6, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rise Of Epoh, The Wielder Of Hope

    Alright, as I go through this I am just going to write down my thoughts. "Epoh had become lazy" Why has he become lazy? "You've been gone a few months", ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Gravity's Pull

    Thanks for the advice! I'm glad you liked it!

    Nov 20, 2011


Human minds are more full of mysteries than any written book and more changeable than the cloud shapes in the air.
— Louisa May Alcott