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Hello Faunafaun Thanks for your reply Yeah, I've decided to take the first paragraph out. I added it afterwards but it seems that was a bad idea. I guess I'll ...

Hello bloodybelle01 Thanks for your feedback. I think the verdicts in to take the first paragraph out. I'd originally added it in later to draw reader in but instead it's ...

Hello Meandbooks Thanks for your feedback. I actually did add the first paragraph in later to catch the reader's attention but it seems to be doing the opposite. I'll definitely ...