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aeternum

  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Starving Dogs (Part 1)

    I appreciate the review! Just a heads up, all the work that I post is all connected in some way or form. What happens in this story might be referenced ...

    May 6, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: She Keeps Us Here

    I appreciate the review! All of my stories I write are connected, so that creature may show up in another story. I have already mentioned some things about this place ...

    May 5, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Outcasts(Prologue & Chapter 1)

    No problem. I look forward to reading the next chapter!

    May 4, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: A Day in the Life (Re-Edited)

    Jesus. I accidentally pasted that. How do I delete it? I liked the story. I hope you keep writing!

    May 2, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Survivor

    I am not the person I once was. (people changing is apart of life) I'm not the little girl who didn't know about the cruel world. (Losing childhood innocence is ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: I Kill Monsters (part 1)

    Thank you for the review! I have a few grammar mistakes I need to work on but I am grateful. Part two is almost finished, it a bit longer, so ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: I Kill Monsters (part 1)

    Thank you for the review! I will definitely edit that. I have never watched October faction but I looked it up and it looks good. I appreciate you taking the ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: I Kill Monsters (part 1)

    Thank you! I appreciate people actually taking the time to add criticism to my work so I know what to work on. I did not go through and proof read ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Art » Realistic, Humor Re: Ear Ring - A Visual Pun

    The piece is well detailed. The pun is funny, if not a little gross. I pray that is not suppose to be an actual ear on the ring. If it ...

    Apr 28, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Collection

    I really like how so little words can say so much. I really like the line about burnt out stars and worn out moons. Creative and imaginative. Each line tells ...

    Apr 28, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Collection

    I really like how so little words can say so much. Well done, dude. I look forward to reading more of your writing!

    Apr 28, 2020


To answer before listening—that is folly and shame.
— Proverbs 18:13