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Re: What happened?
AMEN, BROTHER. Send this to the White House. Lord knows they need this poem. It is a great projection of the perpetual decline of America!!!!!
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: A penny for my thoughts
Your poem is like someones hair: long and flowing. This is one of my hands down favorites. I love the depth and imagry.
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: He love's her
This poem is different from the other love poems. Its always good to bring somthing different to tha table. I like the depth and the emotion. I can feel the ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: "oh love."
I don't get this and yet I do. The frist stanza was the haredest to understand. For me it was endearing and a puzzle to figure out. I liked it ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Epiphany
This a topic close to me. This was how I changed. It was amazing, so I wrote about it. So I hope you guys like it. Comments appeciated. I was ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: When One Loves a Musician
This has alot of depth in this work. I like the imagry and the desription of emotions. This poem is an awesome excuse to fall in love with a musician. ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
I don't get it.
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Music and Writing
When I write I listen to alot of adult contempory like Corrine Bailey Rae, Yael Naim, some Nelly Furtado, Dido, Ingrid Michaelson, etc. It gives me serious inspration.
Mar 23, 2008 -
Re: How Old is Too Old?
This topic is about how old you should go when choosing a boyfirnd/girlfriend? Is two years enough. If you date one year older than that does it make you sleezy? ...
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: City By Day
What do you have against cites? No offence I didn't really like it. I'm sorry, but this was filled with stereotypes that say the city is a endless death hole ...
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: My heart is yours
That was beautiful. It touched me. You're making me cry. :cry:. I need a moment.
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: Pain from affection.
This is a good poem. I like the references to the human body and the imagry. There is are dark and sad connotations comming from this poem. I like how ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Getting Over
That was a short peom with maximum effect. This could hit someone the same way as a long poem. I loved it :D :D. It felt like it was comming ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Blood Heart Chapter three.
That was good. but I'm wondering if this should be in a fiction catagory insted of poetry. But that was good. :D :D . Keep writing.
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: A world where dreams come true
This was great! I could realy see this published.
Mar 13, 2008
