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I know. I beleve Christmas is for everyone. It had Christan roots but now it has been commercialized (thats not a bad thing). So its not just a Christan holiday ...

Great poem!!! I like the depth and rythmn. There is nothing else to say about this poem. To me its flawless!!! :) :) :)

I sit there as the choir sings, Waiting for my cousin. As if he could take any longer. I take a moment to be alone, Just to write. My life ...

What about older women dating younger men being called "Cougars"? Do you think that term is offensive or do you think its cool or you hate older women dating younger ...

Again, in this modern world people's cultures and religions mix and were intergrated in peoples lives. So maybe 400 years ago Christamas was for Christans, but now its for anyone ...

But I think that women usally end up with older men because scientifically speaking women mature faster than men physically and emotionally. So women want someone on their maturity level ...

Sure, Christmas came from Christan roots (look at the name, duh), but the holiday expanded to different types of people, including athiests. When America started other people immagrated and statered ...

Here's an article I found by Sarah Canice Funke: Boston Pops Brawl Skirmish in Boston Symphony Hall © Sarah Canice Funke May 12, 2007 A brawl in the Boston Symphony ...

I think the limit for teens should be two years. It seems reasonable. So how 'bout if you go out with someone three years older. Like 14 and 17? What ...

I like this peice. It was better than your other poem.

Hola. Kix. Welcome to the YWS. Have Fun!!! :D :D :D :D :D

This was okay. Its not great. I think you have to make it more interesting by expanding and using different words. Try making more endearing. This is too repeatitive and ...

Awesome song. Great depth

"Story/poem mixes" as you call them is narrative poetry. I love this poem. It touches me in a way that you don't know. My life used to be like that ...

I like everything except the last two lines. They sounded to corny and cliche. Everything else blown me away. Good Job.