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I liked it. Slightly perverted, but I like the message. I liked the depth the rythmn , and the imagry. I like your poems, they are all excellent.

I like th depth. Great poem!

I read poems because I like peoples' perspectives. I like the depth and imagry in this poem. I can imgane what happens in my brain. One of my favorates. :D ...

10/10 I love your avatar!!

I like the imagry and the rythmn. It so romantic!!!! The girl you give this too is the luckiest in the world. More guys should do this. :D Make sure ...

Well, the guy's a pretty huge jerk. He flirted with two girls at once, and she was watching! And she didn't even break up with him! Talk about issues. But ...

I like it. If it was ever baysitting during the holiday time I would read it to the kid. this has a sugary feel to it.

Some rap is dumb some isn't. Nowadays, I'm leaning towards altenative/ punk-rock.

But pot affects other people. One sniff of the smoke and someone is hooked. Most people don't want to be around that. And it ruins peoples relationships and family.

Welcome. Japanese culture does rock!!! I wish I could visit Tokyo! Have fun, express yourself. This is a nice group of people.

Welcome to the YWS. I hope you have fun!!! Do you like dolphins :D? Because I like tham too. Anyway, have fun!! :D

I think if it for love then its fine, but if it somthing else thats wrong. Like Flava Flav. all the girls on his show don't really like him they ...

Critiques are apreciated.

No because people will eventully abuse it.