aestar101

Aestar. The newbie, wonders what the tavern is and asks for a non-achoholic stawberry daquri.

I like the edgynees and the sarcasticness to it. Its a good poem.

That was passonate. I loved it. Nothing wrong, I think.

I started a group. Its called TRC. TRC is a group for people who like to read or write Romance/Teen fiction. Any type of writing mediums is accepted (short stories, ...

I like this poem, but it feels cliche and overused. Make it your own! It felt like a stream of consiousness for me. It felt like a car rushing by. ...

Nice break up poem. I see tons of angst and depth. You can just see this person that is thorugh with this bad reationship. It has a feel of uncomfort ...

Well they got fame (I hope they are happy)..... in jail! They deserved it. They can say bye to college and a job. Say hello to living in a homeless ...

10/10 Awesone quotes!!!

What do people have against the brwal at Spymony Hall? :D

I liked this but you didn't need to repeat the same stanza. It shows an emotion of a someone that has no self-confidence and hides it. Alot fo grils in ...

I love the rythmn. I yourr poem. Whats with the boldface?this is too sweet of a poem too use boldface. I could see this in a valentine. I love it.

Welcome to the YWS!!!

6/10 Like the ship

Yeah. Tourist brochures for Afirca always say that its all about Safaris, Tarzan, and everyone is primative. :shock: It bugs me. :evil:

For some reason people just don't like her. It has nothing to so with her views.