aestar101

Banned for rascist against bunnies

Thanks for the crits! God, I don't reccomend the cursing because the mods don't like that. :D

That was a great start. 1. Skye's personality I think is slightly depressed and agnstful. I argee withte person above that she night wants attention. 2. I like the writng ...

I would like to help people with their peices. I'm not so much for grammar. I critque more for content. I not one for sci-fi. I specialize in Romantic Fiction, ...

I need someone to critque my story The Reason (part two). Its in Other Fiction. Thanks a lot.

Love this peice. Awesome content. Even better imagry and abstract thought with a tad of romance. This one's a keeper.

Banned for dissing logic

Banned for having a 69:17 post review raitio

Hi Huntress. Tough Girls Rule! Welcome to the YWS.

Banned for not thing of a proper country. HA!

I liked it. It was good. The imagry was excellent.

I agree with the others. This is not poerty its just random specutlions. I actually hate it it was bland, it had no depth it was just there.

The "good guy" of cliches. I liked it. Your twits on cliches. It was good, I like it. Thats all I can say.

That was good. Don't lie, Stella. You are a poet. :)

True, SilentButSure.