aestar101

I was good,b tu I think you need to expand more. Like the fight bewtween the father and the daughter. the wedding and the reception. I felt like the whole ...

Brunette hair hazleish-blue eyes and loves to smile????

5/10 I don't get it

Banned for banning the wrong person.

Banned for putting astericks around everything you say

Banned for dissing the hopeless.

ooookkkaaaayyyyy

Probaly the worst writing assignment is the classic "What do You do Over Your Summer Vacation" essay. It annoying, hackneyed, and uncreative. :evil:

I'll be intersted to get a PM when the next installment comes out. :D

This is the first emo love peom I saw on this site. Emo because it laced with cliched self pity and love because he is dangorusly in love witha girl ...

10/10 Bunny rules the world!!! HAHAHA :D

You can probaly ask Nate to delete this. Don't be ashamed. Its the writng process every author has a work of writng that they thought sucked. You can revise it ...

I made it shorter. I killed the stuff I didn't need: Running down the streets, Like there’s no tomorrow, As I tiptoe though the brick sidewalks, I swing around each ...

My first coustomer!!! I reviewed you story and it was great :D ! Please come again!!!! :D :D :D :D

I liked it. It was very romantic :) !