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Anyone interested? I really want to help.

Nate, where is the line? I mean how far should a storybook go before turning inappropriate? So everyone can know what not to write.

(Azure) I'm stitching up Chelsea. She looks like she is going to live. I wanted to tell her right then, but she was knocked out by anesthesia. Leon looked like ...

Thats crazy!!

(Azure) Oh God. I pressed the emergency button, oh no she was dying. "Chelsea, Chelsea," I starting to cry Tristan holding me The emergency staff came in just after. They ...

(Azure) I started to cry. My best friend was about to die. "What happened? How did you get like this?" I said half crying

I thought it was very pretty.

Nice username. Welcome to the YWS! Hope that you are welcome here.

(Azure) I go to the hospital. My boss yells at me and is giving me a lecture about tardiness. Screw her, she is annoying anyway. I hope I didn't mess ...

(Azure) I wake up and see myself laying next to Tristan. I screamed. What happened? I didn't remember anything except me watching the stars with him. He woke up and ...

I love this poem. I love how it starts out all sexy then wallows into true love. I like the rhythm and the beat of this poem Highlights: Lightning slashes ...

*Bella I thought Azure was with Tristan* He let me in and kissed me. It was a tad too fast, but I loved it. His dark hair covering his face ...

Now I don't feel bad for writing boring parts in my peices of literature.

That was good and imformative. I'll use this in my new work of romnce literature

Excellent! Even though I was too young to join I found it useful anyway. I was looking at the Edgar Allen Poe.