aestar101

It would be cool if there was a sorority/faternity in the YWS. A sorority for the girls and a faternity for the boys. We can host events, talk about gender ...

It's rated R, but I critque it anyway.

Put these in the Twilight group. I liked these except the kyptonite one. The kyptonite looks like a moldy sandwich. I liked the pencil one and the two eye ones. ...

Super cool! I really want this as the YWS background. I like the abstractness and the surrealism in this. And the contrast with the black and the white. It made ...

I have a hard time reviewing this picture because it is too big. From what I saw it looks pretty good. Especially the sun. Good use of light and shadow. ...

These lyrics move mountians. This is really good. I liked the fact that you choose moving mountain to describe tow people's love. This is better than the crap they put ...

Wow. Deep. I loved this piece. It was a nice balance of beauty and fate. A balance that all romance should have. I felt so attached to your characters. Espeicially ...

It is short and sweet. Good for light reading. I liked the decription of Alan. I smiled as his beautiful green eyes locked on mine. He smiled as a lock ...

That was weird.

Wow that hurts. You hate my custom title that much. :cry:

Banned for calling your critiques utterly fabulous.

This is good. I really don't see any problem with it.

I agree with Suzanne. I like your message, but it doesn't seem like poetry. There is nothing really poetic about it. Put in some imagery, smiles, metaphors and other writing ...

I think I'll be the only on in this forum who gets this. She is using titles of popular songs to show how her love life is like. This is ...

Thank you lord a guy who loves romance. You have to join my group TRC. You'll be the first male in my group, I think. I totally romacne obsessed. Welcome ...