aeresky

Hello! I'm going to respond to each of your points individually: 1. I didn't mean for my poem to have any capital letters. I'm fully aware of how this bothers ...

Thank you for leaving a review! Yeah, I always lose steam somewhere in my poetry. I get really close to the idea I'm trying to convey and then...I lose it. ...

Hi, I understand what you mean about the grammar. Truth is, I never meant for it to be particularly correct. Maybe I'm just pretentious, but I always had the idea ...

Thank you so so so much for your detailed review! I'll definitely consider your thoughts. I appreciate your time :)

Hi! Thanks for your comment c: I agree with your idea about 'locks and chains'. It was my first thought, and I didn't change it before posting. If anyone could ...