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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Gypsie Eyes

    Cool chapter. Again, I like Tavrinal, even though he really can't deal with other people. He's still smart. Of course Tannar and Boom had to meet. I was waiting for ...

    Oct 26, 2006
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Gypsie Eyes

    A few notes on peripheral stuff from chap. 4: It's good that you've been able to use the school environment to slip some new characters into the story. Make sure, ...

    Oct 25, 2006


"And what is the use of a book," thought Alice, "without pictures or conversations?"
— Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland