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Re: a ride home (2)
continuation from chapter 1, and if you dont imminently pick up on this this is a flashback. it flows smoothly chapter too chapter i think Chapter 2 (TWO WEEKS EARLIER) ...
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: Look Left: Preview 2, when Theo finds Tessie again.
although i have no clue whats going on, ( the hair burned, and the change in color0 i still apresiated the work dearly. be being new to this whole site ...
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: Why not the Gentleman?
Hello First off, I loved it. the car stuff was a little confusing but i loved the descriptive ability to describe everything. i read the story twice becuase i though ...
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.1) [newly edited]
As much as i read and write i don't find myself ever liking this type of writing but i this cause i thought this was wonderful. everything flowed smoothly i ...
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: Lockdown
not my kind of wring but i loved it!!! thought the MC was descriptive ext great story.
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: a ride home (1)
OK so i updated my fist chapter thanks to the help of my comment. and im posting chapter 2 and 3 in a different thread CHAPTER 1(ANDREW) Andrew, as you ...
Oct 14, 2009