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I didn't see any grammar mistakes really, but then again I'm hopeless when it comes to grammar. Anyways, I absolutely loved this. The pace was almost perfect, and everything just ...

I'm not too great at grammar, so I'll leave that part to everyone else, but all in all it was pretty good. Maybe you should go through and read to ...

It got me kind of interested but it's really short, you should think of maybe making it a little longer, or maybe this can be the little summary you always ...