adeleay

I thought your story was quite good. I think to improve it you could use a little less dialogue and a little more description :) Another mistake is when you ...

Hey I'm new to YWS and i think it's pretty amazing :) I'm so glad i found this site. I really hope i can meet people who love writing and ...

Hi I'm new to YWS. Do you have any tips about work i may submit? Pm me or reply on here :) Thanks Adele x :)

I think the description was excellent. I felt i could truly sympathize with the character. This was truly outstanding and i liked the juxtaposition of the burning and crying (like ...

How do you upload things such as stories and poems? Is there a separate section or can you only post them on forums and blogs? Adele :) x

Amy didn't want to be in prison. In the end it became more of a mental trap than a physical one. No one understood her and that prison made her ...

The phrase 'Human Traces' is a perfect summary to one amazing book. Human traces leads us through the lives of two psychiatrists during the late 19th and early 20th century. ...

With reviews and stuff it isn't nice to be harsh to people. I'm new so i don't know if my opinion on this will be too valid but what you ...

Hey there I'm Adele and new to YWS as well. I joined this because i really enjoy writing and reading fiction. I live in England and hope to study English ...

Hey I'm new Trinity as well I really hope to meet some great people on here. :) Could anyone tell me how you can add people onto your friends list? ...

Hey I'm new too :) I myself come from and England and it's strange how lots of people who speak english who don't have it as their mother tongue can ...

Hi I'm new to this as well :) I thought i would join because i really would like to meet new people with a passion and interest in writing :) ...