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Re: The Sun's Eye
I thought the poem was quite good. [quote] Through the warm august woods, trees blocking the light. Down the cobbled path, Evening sun feeling my face. [/quote] I don't understand ...
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Re: Why do some schools have better education than others?
The school system in the USA sounds really confusing. In Britain, you have to go to school from age 4 -16 no matter what. All schools are given equal amounts ...
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Re: The Death Penalty
I think that murder is murder no matter what. I can understand the opinion on serial killers however murder is murder no matter what. Also in prison, although murderers may ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: The Death Penalty
It depends what context the murder was in. Because even though you may have technically murdered one person you could have attempted to murder others. I think life imprisonment is ...
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Re: Teenagers
Science. Why did Frances need science. Science could explain how so much happens but it could never explain why the adolescent male brain got rid of a boy's common sense. ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: The Death Penalty
I live in the U.K and here the death penalty is illegal. And there is no no longer such thing as life imprisonment for crimes such as a murder as ...
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Re: Thryn
I read the start of this, Im too lazy to read it all as i feel quite tired at the moment. I will read this all when i get round ...
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Re: Teenagers
That boy seemed to be everywhere that day. Every frame of her vision had a speck of that boy in it. Her manicured nails wanted to scratch him away, just ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: First Drink
What could be good with this is you found another word to use for drink and kept us guessing and didn't mention until the end that the narrative was about ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Teenagers
Being watched for some is nerve wracking and skin crawling. For Frances, attention was another drug. It was cheep enough, the high exposed more emotion but the come down could ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: First Drink
I think it is quite good however what does 'first drink' really represent. Is it the first exposure to alcohol or is it the first drink that causes your emotions ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Teenagers
The first day of school for Frances was like entering, in her view, a sewer. It was full of rats who would do anything to have an existence above the ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Teenagers
Name:Frances Harrington Age:14 Appearance:Tall, skinny, likes to wear anything fashionable and if it's not in Vogue, it's not worth wearing. She's always instant on wearing sunglasses, even in the fre
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Hi. I'm new.
It's ok I don't see the point in being horrible I hope you make lots of friends on here :) Have you submitted any works or reviews yet? I you ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Mirror Mirror
I thought the the poem was excellent, i was able to sympathize with the character in the poem :) i liked the line 'Tell me why my bones still hide ...
May 15, 2008
