addictedtowriting

Very nicely written, no over use of rhymes!! Like it :-)

Your lines seen quite too much rhymed which makes it sound juevinile....anyway gud try

A quiet evening. The sun was about to drop. The dim light showed a silhouette of a police station. The deserted area made a worried female voice more audible. “My ...

its a good dying to read furthur....good luck!! :-)