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Re: Sick, Polluted City
Very nicely written, no over use of rhymes!! Like it :-)
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: I Fell Into the Fire
Your lines seen quite too much rhymed which makes it sound juevinile....anyway gud try
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: The Ballet Shoe
A quiet evening. The sun was about to drop. The dim light showed a silhouette of a police station. The deserted area made a worried female voice more audible. “My ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Remembering
its a good dying to read furthur....good luck!! :-)
Mar 8, 2011