adamr

I dunno whether I'm allowed to advertise here, but here goes... It's a superb forum for writing, roleplaying and graphics, as a writer I find the crits and opinions very ...

Yeh-- I did make them pretty evil to be honest. Thanks for the feedback though, guys.

Thanks, I'll check it out right now!!! Anyone else got any ideas???

Heaven is universally stereo-typed as clouds and angels playing harps etc. But have you have tried describing it in an orginal way, expanding using your imaginations-- caves etc. Give your ...

Genius! Somehow Meep has managed to answer my question without any necessary information. She's right-- because character B won't feature again as I've axed book 2 and 3 of my ...

I apologize as this is going to be very vague but I can't reveal too much of novel as I'm hoping for it to become published. Which of the following ...

Absolutely-- if necessary then it's useful to actually pretend you're the MC and almost act out the scene in order to really get the scene onto the page. :D

I had a working title which was a real eye-catcher, which wasn't to associated with my story as it evolved, as my original plot was cliche but is now more ...

Right. Ladies and Gentlemen, a good achievement when your a unpublished author is to finish a chapter. Many will consider themselves more than an amateur but until your publisher-- So ...

Cheers for the response guys. Is it best to just show it as a flashback so the MC can express his thoughts and feelings or should I allow him the ...

Sorry Xtenx, I appear to have not explained correctly-- I'm not going to change the POV but I'm going to allow him to see it from a third-person view, in ...

How could I forget the Harry Potter series:oops: ? As for Chris Wooding and Sapkowski I'll give 'em a go once I've finished... {Wait, I'll add this to the list ...

Right. Absolutely every writer I've met-- by person or on any of the dozens of writers forums that I contribute to I hear that the best advice is to read ...

Characters, alongside the plot is the main component that pulls you into a story. I believe that my MC is interesting however at the beginning I want their to be ...

How would expect the 'miracle' man to try to get into this 'world' -- I know-- but I won't say-- as I need to see if it matches. Your input ...