-
Re: As Dawn Comes To An End
Overall, I like this piece. It is very simple, but a sweet description of transient love. Line 2: "and i hold your face within my end" To me, it is ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
First of all, I feel like the story was a little vague, and that separating the thoughts into separate paragraphs might help, especially when the subject changes from the girl ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: A Love Letter to You
One day, deceased facebook pages will litter the internet, not of those who have died tragically young, but of those who lived out their entire lives and died peacefully. These ...
Sep 19, 2011
