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  • Lyric Poetry Re: As Dawn Comes To An End

    Overall, I like this piece. It is very simple, but a sweet description of transient love. Line 2: "and i hold your face within my end" To me, it is ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Untitled

    First of all, I feel like the story was a little vague, and that separating the thoughts into separate paragraphs might help, especially when the subject changes from the girl ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A Love Letter to You

    One day, deceased facebook pages will litter the internet, not of those who have died tragically young, but of those who lived out their entire lives and died peacefully. These ...

    Sep 19, 2011


One by one they went / And, though each laughed as he returned to earth / Their souls were in their eyes.
— Alfred Noyes (Watchers of the Sky)