abbyowl

Thanks for your advice! Will definitely be helpful for further drafts and future poems. :) I appreciate it!

Hey, thanks for your review! :) I didn't think about breaking this into stanzas before, I'll have to play around with where would be good breaks and such. But I ...

Thanks for your review! I'll take a look at changing that question mark to a period.

Ahhh, wow, thank you so much! I never really wrote poetry that much so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I guess I'll have to try my hand at more ;)