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Re: The forgotten one ch.1
This story jumps right into whats happening. And it would be better if you went back and explained what happened to the boy. And yes there were alot of mistakes ...
Nov 28, 2007
This story jumps right into whats happening. And it would be better if you went back and explained what happened to the boy. And yes there were alot of mistakes ...
Nov 28, 2007
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