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General Fiction Novels Re: The forgotten one ch.1
This story jumps right into whats happening. And it would be better if you went back and explained what happened to the boy. And yes there were alot of mistakes ...
Nov 28, 2007

If Nate ever zeroes the count in "Count Up Until Nate Zeroes It", that zero should be immortalized in the quote gen.
— JazzicusMaximus