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SO, I wasn't sure where this fit, entirely. As part of a school assignment, I wrote an alternate ending to Frankenstein, though it's faairly parallel to what happened in the ...

I like this part- I think you write dialogue pretty well, and it was interesting and well-paced. Just a few nitpicks: Covering two locations, we spied on the people approaching. ...

Did you mean to use 401 or 403? 401 means you either typed in the wrong username, password, or both. 403 means you don't even have a chance to type ...

Whoops! No, Poppy's supposed to be like 20, I guess I'll have to clarify that a little better :P Thanks! I appreciate the sentiments (:

Ahh, I want to submit this (and, yes, I realize I only have a day :P) but I think it needs hefty editing and reviewing! I'd love for you to ...

It's long, I know. It was originally an exercise in different names for colors, but it sort of sprawled out... I may continue it if people think it's interesting. I ...

Aww, what a cute poem! I like the length of the lines, it's different and refreshing. It's usually hard to pull off such long lines, but you manage it well, ...

Wow, your writing is impeccable! I don't think I have any nitpicks to offer, which is quite a feat, given that this is a sizable story! Let me just start ...

Oh my god, Origin by Diana Abu-Jaber. It's a pseudo-mystery thriller that I couldn't even finish. It's about a woman who believes she was raised by monkeys, not an adoptive ...

I think this is highly original, and I really like the concept! As most of the other people who have reviewed this, I love the silicon spiders line, it ties ...

Craig rounded a turn at the corner of Baker and Seventh, his hands in his coat pockets. He saw – with a bit of a pang in his stomach [explain ...

Hey! I've never posted in this forum before, but here's some photos I've taken in the past couple of months that I like... comments and criticism welcome! They've all been ...

I've been writing for... I'd say maybe three or four years, but I've only been serious about it for two or so years. I like to read pretty much anything... ...

“Are we gonna go down to U ncle John’s this year?” asked James, breaking the silence. Christmas time was always the most stressful time of all. I didn’t have the ...

Wow, I really like this poem a lot! It flows very nicely and the emotion is powerful and easily felt. I like the repeating lines, and for some reason your ...