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I really don't think the paragraph thing needs to be repeated, and I personally liked your exclamation marks just because I saw it as over expression of emotion which I ...

I liked how you had a bit of scenery along with a bit of what you'd be thinking, painted a really good picture for me and you had a pretty ...

Maybe I'm just a but sadistic but in the first killing where the little girl stabs the woman, the mental picture I had made me laugh a bit. If this ...

ya i wrote it for a school thing, was suposed to be a short story and about half way through i realized i was going way to far with it, ...

Not a vampire romance fan but id continue reading this, expected to hate it but you did a pretty impressive job. only downsides were you went off topic some, but ...

rough start but it was needed and the second paragraph kept me reading. overall, not really my thing but it held my interest which is ment to be a compliment. ...

Call me Crazy “Hello, David can you hear me?” His voice pulls me out of my head, my eyes refocus from some distant world and my attention is again on ...

The End is Now Bible camp, its been joked about and made fun of by almost every person at least once in their lives, and even though they would later ...