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Hi, I don't know much about poems either, but I'll give it my best. First, a couple of general tips: 1) English is a language with a wonderful variety of ...

This is some of my more recent work along with some old work,and although some of it is not traditional, I hope you enjoy: The twilight comes now The sun's ...

Your haiku is very beautiful, although I find it easier to see an image not in past tense, and maybe you could articulate it a bit more, but it conveyed ...

Hi, I have a book (more like a series), it's the best series I've ever read, the first book is called "the night watch" by Sergei Lukyanenko, if you try ...

Hi, listen, I'm kinda new to this so I only have one comment, I read the first Artemis Fowl book a lot and I noticed that it is extremely Similar ...

Hi, the only advice I can hope to give you is that you shouldn't concentrate only on one kind of poem, but rather you should try to have a look ...

I highly recommend "The Night Watch"(the first book in the series) the most awesome series I've ever read.(the auther is Sergei Lukyanenko) The inheritance cycle(Eragon...) Pendragon The chronicles of

I found the plot line very interesting. The conversation seemed a little stiff at first, but as you let us [the readers] glimps into the personallty of the characters I ...

Hi, I hope you'll like the haikus and if your not sure about something PM me, Thanks. The Sliver of Moon The Turquoise Sky is Calling Another Blank Page The ...

Hi, this haiku is rather strange, its overall concept is very interesting in itself, but i believe that haikus should have three defined parts which can stand alone, but are ...

The hiding sunset The air between day and night Beyond the oak tree The night sky runs deep The purple black enchantment Beyond; the stars bright