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I suppose you're right. Apparently I've seemed to have scared everyone off, considering your the only one who's reviewed XD :D

Thanks, I really appreciated this :mrgreen: Ill keep on trying btw @scribblingquill: Most of my poetry is based on symbolic scripiture having to do with somewhat the Bible, but I ...

oops sorry it got cutoff heres the rest, resuming from shooting a... nasty grin at him before bowing low to the litter that Jadis herself rode upon, carried by four ...

Very well put together, I must agree with vox nihili, your story was written strongly in the style of J.K Rowling :D