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Re: Closed Classroom Doors
My heart tugs past the window pane, Where I look out at England's rain Yet here I am ‘til half past four, Caged in behind a classroom door. A blowing ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Summer Solstice
S ummer - for half the year it sleeps. O nly for winter's time to go L ight coming from her sister's call, S he lies across nature's plains. T ...
Aug 4, 2007 -
Re: light
Hello Dreamer, I liked your poem's concept of light, how you described it flickering, shining and fading away into darkness with metaphors. The structure is a bit irregular since it ...
Aug 4, 2007 -
Re: The Simpsons Movie!
I just saw it yesterday, and I thought it was OK, but not great. The Spiderpig song was ruined by the trailers showing it (catchy though) so when it came ...
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hello everyone, I've been away from the site for a while because I lost my muse (so nobody will remember me :(). But now there's the whole summer to spend ...
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
Five syllables. Wri-ting dot com link. And then there was light for me. The End. :P
Sep 23, 2006 -
Re: Recipe of the Holocaust
Here is my death recipe, made specially for the Holocaust. The horror of Anti-Semitism That struck Jews during the Second War. First there is that shock of Fate that plunged ...
Sep 23, 2006 -
Re: A Toast to the Human Race
2031 Earth is a bustling world, filled with so many animals, plants, objects. The objects lay lifeless on floors and surfaces, holding no emotions and letting the heat pass in ...
Sep 20, 2006 -
Re: Muslim Spain lifestyles
I am writing a story set on the Almohad caphiliate in Medieval Spain (the Muslim part of it). Unfortunately I discovered the civilisation through a video game (:oops:) and so ...
Sep 20, 2006 -
Re: Know Latin?
I'm doing Latin for GCSE after doing it for three years. Whilst I'm far from being an expert, I can help you with your declensions and cases (in other words, ...
Sep 20, 2006 -
Re: Bullying Circle
The second hand of the classroom clock kept ticking. I sat at my desk, trying to concentrate on the maths exercise, yet I was unable to write down a single ...
Sep 17, 2006 -
Re: Dare I Say
Don't let these troubles come down and splatter you Like rain from the dark clouds, dangerous and wet. Force you to the ground, then drench and depress you, As tears ...
Sep 16, 2006 -
Re: Come What May...
Your poem is very dark, and I loved the imagery and descriptions of betrayed love. It is a very realistic and vivid poem, but the lines are very long and ...
Sep 16, 2006 -
Re: Night Birds- Please comment
The rhythm scheme fits in with the dark, tense language you used to describe the Nightbirds' appearance, which kept me interested. You created a brilliant atmosphere, but I also agree ...
Sep 14, 2006 -
Re: How to cope with schoolwork
Use the power of SCIENCE! If you hate your school, perhaps try to persuade your parents to let you try out different schools? Just do your work. No other choice, ...
Sep 14, 2006
