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Thanks again for this review. I've given this chapter a bit of an overhaul and I think it reads much better now. I think it's still in need of more ...

Hey Hiraeth! Thanks for another review. All of the comments you made are totally valid. Especially the one about Conrad's silence in the second half. It's a struggle balancing his ...

Thank you so much for all of the reviews you have left me. It must have taken a while to power through this much so I really appreciate it. You've ...

Thank you so much ^_^ Please dont cryyy

Haha no worries, I might take that joke out tbh, I was very experimental with this section!

Thanks Liberty! A genie is the blue guy from Aladin lol that's the easiest way I can explain. He comes out of magic lamps and grants wishes. Conrad was just ...

Thank you so much ^_^ sorry about the unusual place to end off. There is actually a small time break between here and the next part and I had already ...

Thanks so much! Tbh Im SO happy you enjoyed the Conrad hugging Miiko part, I care way more about readers finding Conrad funny than Henrik. It was hit and miss ...

Thanks so much for the review! The symbols on Henriks arm came from the light that his mother shot out of her hand. When she grabbed his wrist, she dug ...

Thanks Horisun! Appreciated as always!

Thank you so much ^_^ Appreciated.

Thank you so much for your review. The father left to take Conrad to his bedroom because he was so distraught. I was worried that wouldn't be clear enough so ...

Thank you so much :D I really appreciate your help with tenses. And yes, Henrik ^_^ He's pleased to finally meet you lmao Thanksss!

Wow people are so quick off the mark today haha Thanks so much for the review! Your insights are so helpful. I like the idea of a little short story ...