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Thank you! ^_^ apppreciated I cannot recommend enough to check out A Pocket Full of Psies by Panikos. Amazingly well written.

I love this The first two lines are so beautiful. Would be great song lyrics. I’m going to interpret this as someone who actually is really upset but they’re brushing ...

Hey MJTucker Thanks for yet another great review! I understand why you have these concerns and your comments will help me nail my characterisations better in the second draft. Henrik ...

Thanks MJTucker! I tooootally agree. Act 1 really takes a while to reach meaningful conflict. I feel like chapters 6/7 will deliver that somewhat, but we take so long getting ...

I think a good analogy is that Henrik used to be ravenclaw then turned slytherin after his mother's death. I'm personally a ravenclaw, I couldn't do these things Henrik is ...

Henrik is a straight up Slytherin ^_^ He feels sympathy for people but it%u2019s like, behind a glass, if that makes sense. He sees his life as a puzzle to ...

Thanksss ^_^ Thanks for letting me know that last line is unclear! Henrik told Conrad his plan before the chapter starts, and what he wants Conrad to do. I was ...

Thanks so much ^_^ Hopefully the next one will be soon!

Hey ^_^ Thanks so much for the review! And all the pointers with grammar (not my strong suit at all!) I didn't do tags because I posted my last chapter ...

LOL I don’t usually comment on poetry but I do read a lot of the ones posted here. This is one of my favourites for sure. I think we can ...

Thanks so much

Thanksss

Hey MJ. This chapter definitely needs a lot of work. I'm not discouraged! I totally see where you%u2019re coming from. I have a lot of notes for draft 2 for ...

Nawww you actually re-read it, wow what a fan

Thank you so much ^_^