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Thanks Eagle! Glad you liked the descriptions. I wasn't sure if anyone would like that haha. ^_^

Hi Liberty! Glad you liked it, especially the ending. That was really the most important part: realising how much faith Mother had in Henrik to hold things together, which should ...

Hi Horisun ^_^ I agree, when the walk back does drag on. I%u2019m glad youve mentioned that. Thanks once again for your help!

Thank you! I wasn't massively fond of the word sire. Will have to find a substitute at some point. As for the setting, I've taken a lot of inspiratation from ...

Thanks Liberty!

I see what you mean! I will fix that in draft 2. Thanks for reading ^_^

Wow thanks! ^_^

Thanks for the review! I always repeat phrases like that when I%u2019m trying to describe something, thanks for pointing it out ^_^ will fix in draft 2

So many questions :) perhaps some of them will be answered in the next chapter hehehe Thanks for the review as always

Hohoho LOL Yeah your previous comments now make sense, you always had an air of someone rubbing their hands together and now I see why! I totally never expected to ...

Thanks Hiraeth ^_^ I see where you're coming from - that's why I felt this was kinda hard to write, it was a lot of just getting from point A ...

Thanks so much!