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Ahhh, yes thats quite a predicament, I understand now. I think it wont be an issue as you go along tho. Once we are a bit further into the story ...

No worries! Yeah text to speech software is definitely a huge help when line editing. I fully recommend that. Microsoft word actually has a really good one.

Thanks Gloriana! (great name btw) I agree that there is some confusion/contradiction. I will tidy this up at some point because I've received such great comments that help with revision ...

I completely agree about the repetition. I used that device way too much and didn%u2019t even realise. Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! I definitely wanted this character to be rash and illogical and I think what you said about mental health deteriorating is accurate! Thanks!

Ooh yeah, advises is definitely wrong, thanks!

Thanks for the help Eagle. I was starting to get a bit worried about the constant talking so I'll make a note to trim that down in draft 2. Thanks ...

Thanks for the review! Idk why but I always miss an apostrophe in won't haha Thanks ^_^

Thanks SweetRabbit. The next chapter should hopefully deliver what you want for Henrik :) I totally agree with the whole %u201Cchirp%u201D thing. Thats my favourite tag haha. Thanks for the ...

Thanks Lib! Definitely need some introductions. I'll think of a way to do that which is in line with her character. Glad you see some potential with the woman :)

Thanks again for the help Eagle. I'm glad someone is looking out for the senses. I always forget something and you're right, I never really use textures enough in my ...

Thanks Lib. I totes forgot to do that tag haha and I realised when I posted 13. Sorry for that haha.

Thanks for all of the help Eagle. Glad you enjoyed the descriptions, I really struggle sometimes with those. You weren't being harsh at all. You should never worry about sounding ...

Thanks Horisun! I love to hear theories and speculation. I'm glad your head is where it's at, that's all I can say right now haha :) I'm glad you're able ...

I love stuff like this. Short. Punchy. Dramatic. That last line is brutal. This is something to be proud of. -Zoom