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Hi Lib, Trust you to write a story like this haha. That’s the strongest point I’d say. The premise is unique and fun. Some of the lines of dialog really ...

Hi Pan, Sorry this took a while. I guess it took a second to organize my thoughts about this. I feel bad you've gone this long without hearing some feedback. ...

omfg Best chapter ever. I loved this sooooo much. Daisy's surprise girl crush? Yes please. Here for it. Living for it. I could not love this character any more. This ...

PAN Ooh, well you obviously must've known I was guaranteed to like this, what with some Daisy backstory. Very interesting indeed. Also a reappearance of the legendary daffodil dress. So ...

PAAAAAANNNNN! Idk why I preface every review by screaming at you but here we are. And it’s only suspicious if you do what you just did, and stand there looking ...

PANIKOS! “that’s an absolutely wank idea.” It physically hurts that I cannot be friends with this bitch. “Albie’s a moron, then.” :') “Steal two things that’ll be missed, and make ...

Hello Papillote. So I pretty much check out every chapter 1 that gets posted here, but admittedly it's just to see the hook and how much the piece grips me ...

PAN I swear I didn't get the notification that this was posted? Grrrrrrrr. “Fe says that the fifth section ‘may as well be in Greek’,” he said steadily. “I think ...

PAN. You were extremely on form here. This is my favourite chapter so far (except for maybe when we met Paris or when he taught Hildegarde about frames). “That doesn’t ...

“So I said we’d just be secret about it – send her a note, or something, but- but there’s this law, that if a House can’t sell a child to ...

Hi Pan, This is rather good - not much to constructively criticise here. It was so funny when Hildegarde starting shouting about smack :'''') I can't cope with her. I ...

Hi Pan Yesss, Daisy and Hildegarde working together. I love how it really feels like their relationship is growing at a slow, steady, believable pace. Daisy is my favourite character ...

Hi Pan ^_^ Once again, very excited to see that notification. So, I'm going to agree with the issues you've already alluded to regarding the tone. I'm not sure if ...

Oooh it’s the boy from the shop again ^_^ I already ship it. Well, it's great to receive that notification and actually be caught up for a change. I'm really ...

Yaaaaas. Well, obviously I've just read a whole batch of chapters again so a lot of my thoughts aren't central to this particular chapter, but whatevs. So, first of all, ...