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Re: The White Demon
SeraphTree has very good points. the only other thing I have to add is that you've got a spelling error. "I open my mouth to scream, but I chock on ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: The Misunderstood
I'm not sure if you should site where you got the statements from. I know that I was told to mention quotes and such with a sitation in the essay. ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: She's Still Waiting
I'm so happy to have helped inspire you to write this ^_^ I don't know much about poetry to a critique it properly. Still, I find the poem to be ...
Nov 24, 2007