ZombieSquirrel

That is so good! I understood after the Chorus what the subject matter was, beautifully crafted, and moving. Now I have the chorus stuck in my head xD Brilliant!

Thank you both so much! I never thought I was any good, I always thought I was just average o.o Never thought I could make people feel anything. Thank you ...

Mate, that was incredible, made me want to quit writing xD hahahahahahaha. If I could make just a few comments, I noticed a few minor misspellings, and I think on ...

G'day, I'm ZombieSquirrel, I live in Western Australia, and I am UNPOPULAR xD. I am a major nerd, I love Video Games and Anime, I used to write Comic books ...

DROWN ME You held me underwater, Waiting for me to drown, But I have died once before, Your knife is still in my back, Still slick with my blood. Take ...

I was impressed by the imagery, especially after the half way point where it felt like you'd really picked up steam, I didn't get into the start as much, though ...