ZombieSquirrel

Wow mate...Just wow, I was genuinely moved, it made me think of underground caves, giant eyes, and massive storms, Incredible is a pretty adequate description. Great imagery and masterful flow, ...

Ok, first of all...BLOODY BRILLIANT MATE! There is always new concepts and combinations to try, and I can't believe it never crossed my mind to do something like this, especially ...

I really enjoyed it! Short and sweet, to the point, if I had to nit pick it would of course just be that you didn't capitalize at the beginning of ...

Oh Damn -.- it is actually meant to be a collection of story esque poems, their different I can tell you that. It seems as if while copying them from ...

Rain Soaked Stars of Existence Why does blood pour from the innocent veins whilst the creatures feed from our infected cuts? The Skeleton trees in the park are bearing fruit ...

I found it compelling and sad, I connected with a few comments and I loved the references and metaphors, they were very original. I did find the flow a tad ...

I really liked reminded me of night time walking through the streets, It was calming, I really enjoyed it and I thought the flow stood out as the biggest highlight ...

I'm so sorry for you :( I know the feeling all too well. It is healthy to express your feelings this way. It was grabbing, and kept my attention long ...

I loved it, I really can't nit pick at all, it was simple and fun to read, I read through it several times and I thought very highly of it, ...

First of all; Great job, awesome imagery and good atmosphere, excellent use of words and sentence structure. Second; I two am curious as to the title, I have never heard ...

That was beautiful...I mean genuinely amazing, I read dark and depressing stories all the time (Jodi Picoult and Steven King) And that blew so many of them away. Serious talent ...

First of all, I am JELOUS! I wish I had written that hahahaha xD "Ecstatic, expansive eyesightwatching over every soul,uplifts spirits and grants smiles." That part leaped off the screen ...

Burning in the memories, friends regret my heresy, a time away from redemption, falling from salvation, a target painted I’m the obvious one, told myself to hurt, objective done. Waking ...

I definately agreed with Steven, I read through it about five times, each time something different popped out to me, it was fascinating, and made me want to write like ...

That was really cool. It kind of mate me dislike being Male for a second hahahahahaha.