ZombieSquirrel

As a fellow passionate lyricist, i'd be happy to share an opinion :) First of all, I loved the flow, I felt like I was walking along side this protagonist ...

I really liked it, good flow and dialogue, I think there were a few un essential lines here and there, but not nearly enough to ruin the experience. I really ...

Mate, that sounds sick! I listen to songs like that all the time, and this blows away the competition! It had all the major emotions: Anger, Sadness, Madness, all the ...

I really liked this...Perhaps it's the relatible context...Or the similar approach to morbid subjects that I use in my writing, probably both...I am really sorry to heart of this loss, ...

I am in love with the second and fourth Stanza's, they radiate creativity, I have never heard such a unique and beautiful way of desribing a smile, it made me ...

It's about me O.O With burning hands I raised the sun, raised the sun above, I cast the light across the world, to ashes turned our love, The healing is ...

I'm not sure which I enjoyed more: The intelligence of the poem...Or the unusual subject matter, this was a very entertaining read! Thank you for daring to go somewhere new ...

The entire second Stanza was mezmerizing! Your vocabulary is astonishing. The rawness of the emotion works so well with the refined craft of the rant, it's like the Yin and ...

I would pay for that if it were on a shelf, I don't read ever romance stories (I mean ever) But I was enthralled by the imagery, just plain beautiful ...

I really enjoyed it, I have a short attention span so short stories tent to appease my aggrovated creativity itch. I loved the imagery in I think it was the ...

My death will be the thorn in your side I wish I had the slightest pity, I just can’t find the time To spare a moment to consider that you’re ...

Wow! I can't write them to save my life! Wish I could... This was a brilliant piece, you have serious talent when it comes to Description, I really felt "Running ...

Thank you very much :D Yes you may certainly quote me on that :3 And the meaning for me behind "Sever the start" Is that...Sometimes, what you aspire to, or ...

"Forced to mistrust all good intent, He wistfully flies aloneThis battered soul in slow descent, Starved to skin and bone" I can't rememer ever writing something remotely as good as ...

Walking statues falling apart, Crumble to dust, severe the start, Euphoric existence, Translucentstate state, Gun fire clockwork, Sounds the day, Dismiss the cynics, They know not limits, You tought u