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Re: Lipstick Smudges for each lie told...
I am a martyr’s man Made for the selfish tyranny of adequate blame, I am here for a fighting chance, but how can I fight when my hands are tied ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Does wisdom make you strong?
LOVE IT!
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Trixie
Please be honest with your feed back, I really like this Song, It has alot of meaning to me...But please tell me what you think ^.^ My gas mask brother ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Does wisdom make you strong?
Heya! I am the ZombieSquirrel and this Is my opinion: We’re not supposed to lie, cheat or steal. But, for some people these things are far too real. What about ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Razors Covered In Filth
In my rotten life... The Apples borne of death and envy, Afflicted light, in the clear you see, it's bleaching effect. People dying slowly. In my rotten life... The filth ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: It starts with screamo
First of all. Awesome to meet a fellow Metal Head! I wont gush but I just wanted to say how awesome It Is to see another Metal fan writing :) ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Shatter me, Break me
Hey mate! I am the ZombieSquirrel, and I will be your critic for the day :D Firstly, I thought the mixture of emotions created a realistic feel to the flow, ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: An Angel's Omen
Damn mate, your talent is scary! Flow, grip, power, sophistication, this had it all. I also loved the title: "An Angels Omen" So profound! Utter brilliance mate, I can't really ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: The Day My Fathers Skeleton Told Me The Secret Of Eternity
I wrote both in one night, and I was going through a strange part of my life. I think they have something in common, I can't quite describe it...This is ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: you too will turn to dust, one day
UNNNNNNNNBEEEEELLIIIIIIEEEEEEVVVVAAAAABBBLLLLEEEEEEE! That was so awesome I really can't believe it! I am a poet and Lyricist, and I can honestly say that you stomp on whatever talents I thought I ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: You'll Find My Will Under The Bed
I don't really remember writing this. I think I was drunk at the time and very depressed (Hence the drinking) Killing everyone inside Blind and weak, too dead to see, ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Maple Born
Hello and welcome to a review with ZombieSquirrel (Crowd cheers) stay as long as you like :) So i'll start by saying I found this intruiging, when I glanced the ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Shameless
Impressive, good imagery, and some clever metaphors in there aswell. I did think it was a bit short though, this proves to be my biggest gripe, just because I was ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Because No One Loves an Ugly Girl Forever
Wow. In every stanza I found something to love, it just bristled with brilliant lines I wish I had come up with. Reading this was like the equivalent of getting ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: DESCENT
Extract from Jason Sykes Journal, As I stared into the abyss, I felt the rage, terror, and paranoia fade; all emotion sucked from me into the shadows, leaving me numb, ...
Nov 23, 2011
