ZoeRenee

Oh my gosh, That was so funny I could not stopo laughing. I love when the time lapses Like 9 tomorrows later.. so funny I loved it (:

Oh my gosh, That was so funny I could not stopo laughing. I love when the time lapses Like 9 tomorrows later.. so funny I loved it (:

Spooky, I really like it. i'm glad I got the chance to read it. a few minor things to fix but other than that a wonderful peice Love, Zoe Renee ...

I've asked my friend this question he honestly doesn believe me. If this was sung to him I think, he'd understand. this is probably one of my favorite things to ...

it is a very simple poem, but it captures you. I like it very much It kind of gave a peace to dieing. like the earth is done and i ...

Its really sweeet. I know what it feels like and this really hits home. the way you write describes how it feels to miss. the spacing kind of bugged me ...

I really like it.. minus dashes.. you are very soulful. this describe how most girls feel every now and again.. i absolutly love it. makes me feel a very nice ...

You went through it really fast. Its a romance not a boom bam thank ya mam. hes seduceing her and same to him. put more emph in it. give a ...

Your writing is very choppy. you cut of at all the wrong places. make it flow better. also, emo poetry, not a good title. make it more capturing to a ...

Perfectly Perfect In everyway And in your heart thats how she'll stay and to her how can I compare to the perfect smile to her perfect hair. you'll always love ...