Zibbie

Hey CW! I like the way you stated everything in a matter of fact way, it was a different style of approaching Rue's character. Only problem was the lack of ...

Oh Esther! Long time no story telling! First thing I read back on YWS and i couldn't be more glad I'm back. Please never stop writing. It seems all the ...

This was cool! I like the plot, and it sounds like it will be super interesting! "Leila shock her head" I think you mean shook! Unless she's also able to ...

Kadee got it all! yay, happy birthday to meee! And it's almost the 4th of july so happy independance day to you! I understand what you mean about not being ...

i LOVE veronica mars, and i think this sounds like a good idea. But definitely not logan, unless you can find a way to make him seem like less of ...

Yep it's long, but because you asked nicely ill try and review it as best as i can :) She stopped near a bench and wiped the leave off of ...

Okay so i think i was totally off track with the Alex being gay thing. I'm so excited to read more! Just so long as you avoid squirrely's advice, I ...

Hey White Shadow! I'm Zib, and I love where this story is going. I really like the ways you just alluded to the fact he might be a vampire, and ...

hey! its been i while since i reviewed anything so I'm sorry if its rusty. Nitpicks! Doesn't mean Ms. Queen Bee has to know she can find out from some ...

It sounds like a good plot in the novel description, but i read the prologue and was left feeling confused. I would firstly describe who "they" are, like you did ...

I love it! your description is fabulous and very creative. Soon, however, Thosol looked out into the vast space and sighed, for it possessed all of the joys that the ...

Cool! I like the idea and the characters, her sister Teddy sounds like she could be very interesting :) Now for the dirty nitpicks... For as long as I can ...

Really liked the whole piece over all! Not a lot of grammatical mistakes, but there were some parts that confused me. It was ripped two months prematurely from its source. ...

Yay! love this story. You're probably tiered of my reviews, but you asked for it! The carriage that was carrying the princess was late to arrive. Okay, I'd rather this ...

I can't help it, I'd feel bad if i read the chapter and didn't review. All of a sudden, I was very aware of how quiet it was in my ...