Zephyr

Hello to you too! Thank you, niteowl, for the gift- I enjoyed it greatly. And Emma...if by pressie you mean present, I haven't really got anything to give you, but ...

TYWC, of course, and I remember most of the older members. Same name...Zephyr.

Not much to talk about, but since I'm new and I don't want to read the critical essays required for class tomorrow, I'm going to post as much as I ...

The only issue I have with this poem is that it is too scattered and unfocused. Where you have good images and beautiful phrases (magnets forsooth) you lack a general ...

It's unique and well written, with a good premise, but I feel like your description (while excellent, by the way) sometimes seems too forced and overly elaborate. It's good to ...

I can't seem to get mine to work. Otherwise, they seem like nice little guys (and girls).

The poem has a good focus and I think using the guitar as a device to concentrate the entire poem around is a very good idea. Just a note, it's ...

Hi guys, I'm new, formerly of TYWC, and just a little confused...I'm not even sure if I'm posting or replying. I'll fool around with this a bit, I think, and ...

Though there is a good premise, I feel like this is lacking something- which may, in part, be due to the fact that it is a chapter and not a ...