Zentillius

Okay. It has been two months. I believe that you should have at least begun to continue it after your halted progress because of bed time. People are awaiting impatiently ...

The girl puts her hands on the ground wishing to be closer than as close as she was. Consider rewording this sentence so as to make it more clear that ...

Goodness me. Very nicely done, just as all the above have read. I enjoy reading other's romance pieces to see the different styles and it basically educates me. As before, ...