Zelalem

Thanks a lot for all your comments! Ecspecially Writersdomain, I think I'll do a revised version of this poem and post it in this thread over the weekend!

Thanks. Glad someone else feels that way too! I actually seperated the lines of the poem. Instead of "Blond hair. Blue Eyes." It would be: "Blond hair, blue eyes." Would ...

ah! Thank you so much! I'll try to write more soon!

Thanks so much you guys! I think I'll definitely keep trying to write more. Thank you.

Thank you so much! That is my first poem so I'm glad you liked it!