Zekkie876

I agree with wickedwonder This was too short for a good fiction piece w/substance If you added on, I am sure that it will be amazing!

This was amazing, for a preface There wasn't many errors, although I have a question: "Sleepless nights are common, and the thought that 'every family mus live like this' is ...

This is cool! I haven't red your first part, but I am going to! Overall, this was good, with just a very few minor errors can't wait for more :)!

I loved this piece, the way you depicted Susan was amazing I'm a guy and I admit I got emotional at the end goo job

Interesting, really interesting! I have read your other two chapters and I must say, thy were amazing! You have a great imagination, and you know how to put it to ...

a good piece, and I understand that the work is not finished yet I recommend just a few adjustments, but nothing major. Overall, I enjoyed it Looks like something that ...

Mr. McFinnigan As I hefted my backpack over my shoulder, I dug my hand into my pocket, fishing for my keys. Just as I walked up the front porch and ...

I agree with Justin. I liked the poem, but just a few adjustments should be made. Overall, good job :)

This was AMAZING its been awhile since I've read such a deep, rhythmic poem such as this. It really astounds me. AWESOME JOB! :)

Thanks! It wasn't nitpicky, I really appreciated it! You gave me some helpful critique that I really hadn't seen when I typed it up. You have helped me alot. About ...

Haha, I already love you guys! well, I have no pets, although I'd really like a dog! My favorite food is Filipino food, cause I'm Filipino! Green's my fave! :) ...

Hello, I'm Kirk Johnson, a moody, sarcastic guy who is a "chauvinist pig", and loves to utilize his Kung-Fu skills to help the citizens of Chicago. How was that? :) ...

hey guys! To lilgreendots well Zekkie isn't my real name, so, you can call me Zeke, or Zek. My favorite Genre to write is mainly fantasy. I lve making my ...

I'm very glad that I found this site, and judging by the friendly attitude everyone has, I'm even more happy! :D Anyways, I'm just starting out as a writer, and ...

Battle at Kruger Dust billowed on the African plain as the herd of buffalo trampled on by the river. The herd ran on the incline of the shore, and trees ...